Character Counts: The Emotional Investment

When we say we love a story, are we addressing the plot… or the characters?

This is a guest post that was written for author Auden Johnson, focusing on character development.  I had the honor of guest blogging for Auden Johnson, author of The Merging Worlds series,The Jura series, and novellas, including;Visible Through Darkness, Shadows under the Light and Devdan Manor. She has also published short stories including No Vacancy, Clipped Wings and Welcome to My World. As a lover of dark fantasy, Auden Johnson is a passionate writer who enjoys the beautiful and haunting blend of horror and fantasy. 


For most people, there are two types of stories – plot-driven or character-driven. Growing up, I was always told by the fiction writing experts that you either had cardboard cutouts running around taking over the world, or you had melodramatic, deep characters sitting on benches doing nothing but contemplating their neighbor’s existence.

Never both.

Genres such as fantasy lend themselves to wonderful plots. After all, who wouldn’t want pages full of lightsaber battles (yes, Star Wars is argued to be in the fantasy genre, not sci-fi), magic wars, special portals, secret quests, and irreversible curses? If you’re like me, then you’re helplessly in love with fantasy fiction – a true story fanatic at the heart. The stories we love draw us in with excitement and adventure, forcing us to live and partake in the grand adventures.

But are we really in love with the adventures? Sure, we can enjoy a grand story full of plot twists and sub-plots, but is that it? When we say we love a story, are we addressing the plot… or the characters?

Think about it. We as readers emotionally invest in fictional characters. Have you ever died inside when your favorite character left the fictional world? (Please tell me I am not the only one who gets choked up as Frodo sails in the West.) You experienced that pain; you died with them.

The character’s joy, pain, anger, trials and triumphs become yours when you experience the story.

Without them, there is no story. Their decisions and responses often determine major events in the plot.

As a writer of fantasy, I have come to learn and appreciate the importance of character development. We want readers to identify with the characters, to find a piece of themselves in the story.

As a writer, you need your reader to emotionally invest in your character. The fantasy genre can be difficult when it comes to creating 3-D characters as the genre relies heavily upon world building and is known for larger, all-encompassing plots. In the midst of the dark forests and evil kingdoms, realistic character development can be easily forgotten or belittled.

Several months ago, I researched common fantasy clichés just out of curiosity. Not to my surprise, many of the issues listed consisted of “common farm boy becomes king”, “sweet princess has no personality”, “old wizard is wise”… you get the idea. Boring. Standard. It serves the plot well, but the individuality of the character is diminished.

This isn’t to say to that all fantasy stories suffer from this issue of lack of character development. However, the genre lends itself to unique storytelling as it is set in a world where anything can happen. Magic exists. Animals talk. Humans are not the only intelligent beings. If the genre permits such imagination and diversity, then why should character development be any less?

Give your readers a reason to connect with your characters. It’s what we do in real life. We, as humans, interact with each other on a daily basis (unless you are like me and find yourself spending 25 hours of the day working alone). What is your MC’s thoughts on life? What makes him tick?

Grab a piece of paper and write a close family member or friend’s name on the top. Then write down their qualities – personality, their values, their background and how it affects them, the way they talk, the words they use, the way they handle situations, leader or follower… the list goes on.

The point isn’t about stressing over each character’s unique gifts and talents, making it a tiresome burden for you as a writer. It’s about giving your reader someone to connect with. We as humans are always looking for another empathetic being we can identify with, and in stories the only source for such connection lies in the character’s internal journey.

This is where people are divided on the issue of character-driven stories vs. plot-driven ones. Your story will fall into one category, but strive for both. People say character-driven stories may be dull and lack the excitement plot-driven ones contain.

But think of it this way: your characters should exciting. Even boring ol’ Scrooge (A Christmas Carol) was an intriguing character before he began his transformation. His flaws and the lingering question of whether or not he would overcome his short comings gave readers a reason to keep reading and identify with him. (Because we all have flaws.)

Think of it another way: what makes a day exciting? Crazy incidents occur because people make them happen. If no human is responsible, then how people react is often more intriguing than the event itself. Just turn on the news and you’ll get the idea.

There’s no difference in the art of storytelling. Your characters are the key factor in determining how the story often plays out, and because of their major importance, readers need to identify with them. Give your characters honest, unique, unpredictable traits, and your story (even character-driven ones) will be captivating.

Add dragons, kingdoms, bloody wars, demons, magic curses and all the other wonderful components of fantasy, and you have a page-turning story right there.

Give your readers characters to emotionally invest in. Give them real, flawed, and unique characters. Your readers won’t forget them


10 thoughts on “Character Counts: The Emotional Investment

  1. “Reach a star, travel so far or find out who you really are
    Climb a hill, learn a skill, all of your dreams you can fulfill
    Take a dream, make it real, don’t let yourself give in to fear
    Come with me you can make it anywhere” – Fantasy, Stratovarius.

    To quote a favourite song of mine. I play this for inspiration and motivation, as part of a larger playlist.

    In my own experience, it is definitely both. I couldn’t imagine writing a story that caters to only one side…characters or story.

    Everything is related, and in this way we can weave meanings into the lines. I often felt bad if stopped writing, because I felt like I was betraying my characters.

    And besides, fantasy is meant to be vibrant and colourful. Not black and white.

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    1. Yes- it is very vibrant and lends itself to wonderful story development! I love that quote too. And yes, good writing focuses both on character and plot.

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  2. I think it’s a combination of both. I need to be invested in the characters, but I also need there to be a plot. It IS super important to write good, realistic characters. They need to seem like people we know.

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    1. It is. Having a good even mix of both is important for story development. I am hoping to soon discuss plot development too.


  3. I absolutely need both an awesome plot and a deep cast of characters in order to fall in love with a story! Between the two, however, I’m pickier about characters. If I love them, I can overlook a lacklustre plot. If I can’t connect with them, the best-constructed plot won’t grab me. Great post!

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    1. Yes, good stories have both deep and real characters as well as compelling and intriguing plot. I too am pickier about characters because when I read a story, I connect with them (or try to depending on how well-developed they are)


    1. Hello Justine 🙂
      Glad this gives some insight. I agree as a character-driven writer that plot itself is not my strength. Finding the right harmony between plot and character is not easy so sometimes I won’t try to deal with plot but rather allow my characters to “do what they want” and then polish and refine those actions for plot.


  4. Definitely a mix of both, but a great character can make the most lacklustre of plots come alive…thankfully, most writers who birth strong characters do likewise for their plot babies. Then again, what constitutes a great plot is all relative. As a reader and a writer, I don’t need nearly as much action as the next person, so there’s plot aplenty or a-not for all kinds!

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    1. Hello 🙂 I agree, good and realistic characters can certainly help move the plot along. I too don’t need as much action in my plots; I find that good character development can really drive a story.


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